Acrostic
-
A acrostic is define as a poem in which the first and/or last letter of lines form
word(s).
I have decided to come up with a few and dedicate them to fellow forumites. Of course, it is again one of my buaya tactics, but all for the fun of it. *Grinz*
[This message has been edited by Callan (edited 17 May 2000).] -
Here is the very First one...presenting....
From the theater of dreams he comes,
Arriving on a fine white horse,
Thinking he has put on a facade,
Never did he know his own attractions,
Under the facade he put up,
Grace and gallantry I see,
Lingering beneath his rough surface,
Yummy a man is he. -
One of my Favourites.....yes to you Naive...
Next to my heart,
A butterfly floats,
Igniting the fire my hearts behold,
Vehemently my thoughts wander,
Enigmatic images abound,
Gallantly I advance,
Irresitible you are,
Riding on my emotions,
Love brings me to you. -
I been thinking....and wondering....and I asked you today....will you not tell me the answer to my question?
Safely in my arms I cradle,
Carrying my soul in her,
Ablaze my heart she did,
Ridding my mind of thoughts,
Leaving behind a gemstone,
Exuberantly I progress,
Thinking of what future beholds,
Thrill I am to know. -
To a sweet young lady in IRC....
Riding the waves of loves,
Emiting warmth of emotions,
Giving thy dame my heart,
Igniting the flame the burns my soul,
Never will the fire stop,
Always will it yearn for your attention. -
To a lady, I have yet to meet....but exchanges a many....you know who you are...
Another star has fallen,
Never will it burn as bright again,
Genuinely pure as a crystal,
Evidently it shines across the sky,
Liting up the horizon,
Irdescent lights spreading as the soft Rain platters,
Nip myself I did,
Eschew myself from such perfection.
Pleading for my Sanity,
Helplessly I fall,
Unable to find reality,
Aligning my life to you. -
I know not your full name....so I tried to psuh everything in to 5 verses....hope I did not do a bad job. Cheers, know that your presences is appreciated.
Surfing acroos the horizon
Adorable she is
Motivating her surroundings
Making a difference to life
Ingrained in you it is. -
A lady far from home....a lady who I really like to know....and of course, a lady so beautiful to me.
Illuminating the crimosn sky,
Nebulous scenes play like a flim,
Gliding through my mind.
Resonating voices fill my thoughts,
Intensifying my emotions,
Dubious of who you are.
Teach me the way to know you,
Arouse my glowing desire,
Yank me close to you. -
To a lady who's enthusiasm burns like a forest fire....and whisk herself to members status in such a short time.
Catching a glimsp of heaven,
Revitalise by you.
Youthful engeries abound,
Searching for the destination,
Always eluding my heart,
No end is my thoughts of you,
In my dreams I finally found,
A woman's heart where I can rest. -
Originally posted by Callan:
I am impressed!!!
Here is the very First one...presenting....
[b]From the theater of dreams he comes,
Arriving on a fine white horse,
Thinking he has put on a facade,
Never did he know his own attractions,
Under the facade he put up,
Grace and gallantry I see,
Lingering beneath his rough surface,
Yummy a man is he.[/B]
thanks!!!
FnU
------------------
Magic -- Ekin
[This message has been edited by FATnUGLY (edited 17 May 2000).] -
Originally posted by Callan:
Hmmm....truely impressive.
To a lady who's enthusiasm burns like a forest fire....and whisk herself to members status in such a short time.
[b]Catching a glimsp of heaven,
Revitalise by you.
Youthful engeries abound,
Searching for the destination,
Always eluding my heart,
No end is my thoughts of you,
In my dreams I finally found,
A woman's heart where I can rest.[/B]
------------------
Don't be afraid to tell someone you love them.
If you do, they might break your heart..but if you dun, u might break theirs.. -
Hmph! You left me out again!
------------------
To err is human;
to really screw up, you need a computer -
Kill
The
Enemy!
Short and sweet! Try and beat that Callan! -
okay, callan, even you don't dedicate one to me, haha, let me join the fun to dedicate one to you, hehe *wink*
Cause I dream of you all the time
And sleepless tonight
Late at night, you, dear guy
Linger in my mind
All I want is you can be mine
No one can take you away by my side -
Kaoz... forget abt me too!!! N 2 tink dat u once pledge undying love to me!!!
Chao chee by!
Ah ni kuan buen eh sai!
Lan jiao wei ah ni zueh!
Lim bu kua liao jin buay song!
Ah si mia lit gou boh wa eh miah!
Ni na buay eh jiu mai ho wa du dio!
How's this?
------------------
ming4 zhong1 ruo4 you3 zhong1 xu1 you3
ming4 zhong1 ruo4 wu2 mo4 qiang2 qiu2 -
Callan, here's my tribute to you:
Casanova in disguise
A fine young man misunderstood
Longing for Ingrid Tay's company
Loverboy is his other name
Acrostic is his faculty
Nah beh chow kitty dun any how scold him
hahaha
[This message has been edited by OldMan (edited 24 May 2000).] -
Hehehe.... You all really creative sia...
------------------
Don't be afraid to tell someone you love them.
If you do, they might break your heart..but if you dun, u might break theirs.. -
Under a mournful sky
Glistening in the wind
Like a sparkle in a cave
Yet shining thru the night
Because of you
Utterly chio
Tomorrrow I will live
And I will soar the skies!
Determined to meet you
On and on I go
Risking all
Although I know in the end
Bitter sweet memories
Leave me shunned and distant
Eternally kept from seeing you
hahahahahahahahh -
Wow wow...oh my..I'm impressed, both my name and nickname got peom....hiak hiak....so happie~~!
-
What's axxx pxxx?
Ah Bei, an zua? Want me to write one for u also huh?
------------------
ming4 zhong1 ruo4 you3 zhong1 xu1 you3
ming4 zhong1 ruo4 wu2 mo4 qiang2 qiu2 -
Thanks Callan...sorry hor i nv been a poetic person so i cannot write 1 4 u...
But i m not telling u! :p
------------------
When I first saw you, I saw love. And the first time you touched me, I felt love. And after all this time, you're still the one I love. -
But itsn't a poem supposed to rhyme?so far have detected a minority that do only,but good job done nonetheless,so far no one here more creative that you at composing these acrosticsOriginally posted by Callan:A acrostic is define as a poem in which the first and/or last letter of lines form
word(s).
[This message has been edited by Callan (edited 17 May 2000).])))) -
Courageous to defend the damsals in distress
Aggresive to the evil forces
Looking overhead from the tower in the castle
Leaving no stone unturned
Enemies are defeated instandly
Never complaining and never taking a rest
------------------------------------
Full of fun
And full of laughter
Throwing jokes ard
Notti but nice
Unable to forget
Goodness in ur shell
Living as a samaritan
You r a true gentleman
-------------------------------
------------------
Darkness is the only solitude I have at the moment. When I assist people, they dun c me, but they can sense my presence. I am glad to help, I will be very happy if that person is happy. As long as the person I help doesn't fall into the darkness like I do, I am happy.
Darkness may be where I belong after all.
[This message has been edited by AngelDark (edited 22 May 2000).] -
eh kitty, mai siao siao, li jit eh char bor gina mai tak pai kong chor weh lehOriginally posted by Hello Kitty:What's axxx pxxx?
Ah Bei, an zua? Want me to write one for u also huh? -
hi callan.. what abot me????