Poetic Passion
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one more from moi!~! \(ò¿ó)/
"Souls of emotion"
Things are always lost
value unknown to others
only the owner feels it
the pain that wrecks the heart
One that is a treasure to the heart
merges with the body as one
If something is lost unintentionally
the pain will be everlasting.....
If it was not by accident,
a part of us dies along with the object
Our emotions falling into the darkness
and we become souless hereafter.....
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Darkness is the only solitude I have at the moment. When I assist people, they dun c me, but they can sense my presence. I am glad to help, I will be very happy if that person is happy. As long as the person I help doesn't fall into the darkness like I do, I am happy.
Darkness may be where I belong after all. -
lonliness lost
a shallow cost
passion rises
in the hole of prices
greed n man fused a whole
cradeled in from the sun's shiny bowl
a staggering man
dwelling it's pieces up
lost in his own highway
melted out for good -
coming from the top
popping his pills again
greater than any worldly pleasures
a feeling so absurd
a falling piece of tongue
sniggering down to fall
as the winter freezes him up
he grabs his ladder to fill himself up again
straight into the pits of danger
allowing poles of ice jab
cool, cold heart....
he tries again -
hi all.....just some abstract writing....
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hmm...don't know if u noticed, but ur poem seems more like an acrostic one......first letters make up ANDREA. =) are u by any chance creating and acrostic poem?Originally posted by Enigma:And in darkness engulfed, I found myself
Neither friend nor love to take comfort in
Dreaming dreams and fantasies of
Roaring waves and tinkling trickles
Enthralling laugh and mesmerizing gaze
All encompassing light there shall then be -
Hideous yet lovable
I long to touch your broken face
Your hairy armpits resemble
That fat and pouty lip
Your huge and corny nose
Has so much juices
Just waiting
As my inheritence -
Here's the untitled poem. Dedicated to a group of friends who graduated one year before me
I sat there thinking
Of an opening
For a poem with meaning
Dedicate to you people who are graduating.
Sadness wells
I rather not dwell
Thinking of happy moments that were really swell
It always rings a bell.
The times we spent
Often till our very last cent
Our curfews we reluctantly bent
Chatting and laughing to our hearts content
Our 'sim su' sessions
Was a time for confession
To get rid of the depression
It never fails to leave an impression.
Do remember this, it is a must
Do not let our friendship turn into dust
Something so beautiful, 'coz it's build on trust
Unlike iron, it's not meant to rust.
And so, forget me not
Don't let your memory rot
Although on the map our country is just a dot
It's here that i found you precious lot! -
Hi there, I guess this is my fourth attempt at writing a poems. What I have written so far maybe consider 'poems' ? or not. Pls give me comments on the following 'poems'
This so call 'poems' was written at and unearthly hours in another topic, the feeling just came....I'm not sure whether it pass off as a poems here goes
Love struck me when I saw you
To adore you was my goal
but alas the flower wither and die
Doors were shut
World crashing down
Nothing matters in hope of rekindling
Like a dream that never came true
Embracing hopes of reunion to the end of lives
The day I die shall be the day I thrive
Hopes are no longer true
Only dreams come true
Uncertainty still reign hold
I just have to seat and ponders what's behold
Ah yes .....pls give some comments, this was for my first love......thx guys
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Nothing can't be done, unless you don't want to -
Fate
The day I first saw light,
I knew someone was there.
One who makes me whole,
One who fulfilled my life.
The moment I knew it was you,
My destiny was found.
My life thus have a purpose,
to find you, now my mission.
We were once united,
but now physically divided.
With fate as my compass,
I sought our union.
When fate brought me to you,
I found it could only do so much,
for you were held captive,
and a compass don't help much.
Thus I use my key,
for I knew it to open all.
One so compassionate,
this key I call love.
With love I found your freedom,
but you were alone and bare.
Thus I became your armor,
and we are whole once more.
I thank fate for finding thee,
but my love did just as much.
And with me as your armor,
Your heart will hurt no more.
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J'adore Naive. I will catch you if you fall...
I fight this war in Honour of my princess. LIBERATION! -
mebbe u could try "unforgotten moments"?? =)Originally posted by [ish]:Here's the untitled poem. Dedicated to a group of friends who graduated one year before me
I sat there thinking
Of an opening
For a poem with meaning
Dedicate to you people who are graduating.
Sadness wells
I rather not dwell
Thinking of happy moments that were really swell
It always rings a bell.
The times we spent
Often till our very last cent
Our curfews we reluctantly bent
Chatting and laughing to our hearts content
Our 'sim su' sessions
Was a time for confession
To get rid of the depression
It never fails to leave an impression.
Do remember this, it is a must
Do not let our friendship turn into dust
Something so beautiful, 'coz it's build on trust
Unlike iron, it's not meant to rust.
And so, forget me not
Don't let your memory rot
Although on the map our country is just a dot
It's here that i found you precious lot!
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a new poem for this topic that has somehow stopped moving.........
How are you dear stranger looking from afar?
What are you looking at, my dear stranger friend?
I called you friend,
but somehow, I don't seem to know you.
You stand so far, almost out of reach.
I long to reach out and just touch you,
but always, you'd slip away,
further and further away from me.
Don't leave me standing there lioke a fool,
Talk to me, don't ignore me.
Look my way, not walk away.......
(for a friend i miss....)
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Deep down in my heart,
You still stand a place.
Little did you know,
Aroused senses bring teary eyes.....
Never have i forgotten you.....
Till this day, I still love you.
And as i wait,
Never will i stop loving you.
(for the first guy i've ever loved...n probably still loves/misses...)
ps: not very excellent pieces of poem but well.....not really up to poems now....just trying my best. =) comments please!!