8 words poetry
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life we lead is an illusionOriginally posted by De|usi0n:care to haf a go at my list?
1. illusion
2. devastation
3. solution
4. rampage
5. promise
6. unknown
7. survival
8. indulge
gd luck...i thnk 1st than i post my poem also.
no solution, no conclusion
rampage existance ruin civilisation
devastation - the result of ambition
promise no tomorrow for education
yesterday is just survival's reflection
unknown is tomorrow's deduction
so lets indulge in me, your delusion -
ahhaha very witty!Originally posted by De|usi0n:life we lead is an illusion
no solution, no conclusion
rampage existance ruin civilisation
devastation - the result of ambition
promise no tomorrow for education
yesterday is just survival's reflection
unknown is tomorrow's deduction
so lets indulge in me, your delusion
u're pretty fast, somemore u did three this morning. but ... u've had sleep (right?)!! something that i'm gonna get right about now~~
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Instant
1. illusion
2. devastation
3. solution
4. rampage
5. promise
6. unknown
7. survival
8. indulge
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Amidst the devastation, i need to be free.
There you are, an illusion to save me.
Just another solution to help me age,
No one to help me with this emotional rampage.
Never can i forget the day of promise,
when they day comes along with no bliss.
My heart skips with every ring of the phone,
Just another person asking the unknown.
I belong to not only a girl,
but someone i rely for my own survival.
Our love had no chance for me to indulge,
A hidden secret, no chance to divulge.
Now you are gone away from me,
Now the chance would never be.
A time again yet not enough,
To tell you how much i love.
~~~~~~You~~~~~~~~~ -
yeah, more and more pple joining in the fun
master, give us ur list -
1.Despair
2.Direction
3.Breath
4.Suffer
5.Perfection
6.Spit
7.Confused
8. Die
brb to write the poem -
my life reflect my despair
suffer when i strife
confused is my mind
perfection tat's not mine
spit words that curse me
cursing beneath my breath
no direction i can see
die and sleep i wish -
Cornered Like Fu[/i]ck
Walking alone in a pit of dispair,
I find myself scared from no one there.
Every where I turn is the wrong direction,
Self mutilation to face why waste perfection.
Only to find im buried deep within my soul,
Lost,scared and confused in my own hole.
This sweet breath is only a lie,
I'd rather suffer alone than let in and die.
I'm begging you down on my knees,
Help me, hold me, confort me please.
I spit at you God for if you were real,
You would banish this hatered and sorrow i feel.
I hope you see this God as a symbol of my hate,
For the hell I deserve is a devastating fate.
My flesh is open, my entrails spill apart,
My tears run red like the blood in my heart. -
meaning you too couldn't resist the temptation of the words *~*Originally posted by jOhO:ahahhaha.. wat do u mean me too? i was VERY sober and sane and awake writing this!
most of the poetry is about sadness, bleakness, life, love, emotions. SEX is a very big part of many pple's lives too!
of course this isn't the way to look at sex, altho some do! and with those words i somehow saw an opportunity to write about how those pple could view sex.
hope u can enjoy urself today.. altho i dun see how..
I did somewat enjoy myself today, thx for the concern...
day of over-eating, not enough sleeping and bad bad poetry... -
She was confused,Originally posted by Master -_-:1.Despair
2.Direction
3.Breath
4.Suffer
5.Perfection
6.Spit
7.Confused
8. Die
brb to write the poem
and lost within herself.
Without a sense of direction,
having no way out...
Every breath is one of suffering
she died a thousand deaths...
Each day she carries the burden of despair
and a loneliness that no human should ever have to bear...
Trapped by the cage of perfection
and it's seemingly holy light.
She spat at life's unfairness,
yet, she gave up... without a fight...
and was thus lost... forever...
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Not a good one... but at least it rhymes...
(and I have been awake for 34hrs, and counting... ...) -
She crumbles in dismay, as she looks down half afraidOriginally posted by En':
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This is a game where a user of this forum gives out 8 completely random words (or 10 for advanced) and the rest of the members try to compose a poem, (making sure the poem includes all 8 words), that actually makes sense... Anyone up for the challenge?
Okay, the first word list:
1- Crumble
2- Dismay
3- Dolphin
4- Flaw
5- Mirage
6- Reality
7- Silver
8- Wreck This should be pretty interesting...[/i]
Do we save the dolphins, But yet still kill the trees
No silver in her wreck, in life a twisted neck
The mirage of her flaws, is reality in the raw.
hmmm....hahaha my pathetic attempt at poetry ehehe -
Direction to happinessOriginally posted by Master -_-:1.Despair
2.Direction
3.Breath
4.Suffer
5.Perfection
6.Spit
7.Confused
8. Die
brb to write the poem
Yet we despair to find it
We hope to breath eternally
But suffer the moment that we breath
Perfection that all men seek
But when it comes they curse and spit
You merely exist but never lived
Pities as you die a confused freak.
hmmm....another pathetic attempt hahaha -
a little bit can't be bothered rite now, but i browsed thru the poems..
keep it up pple!!!
but where's our crazy poet gone?? -
wats new
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“I was dumbstruck by your beauty,Originally posted by En':,
This is a game where a user of this forum gives out 8 completely random words (or 10 for advanced) and the rest of the members try to compose a poem, (making sure the poem includes all 8 words), that actually makes sense... Anyone up for the challenge?
Okay, the first word list:
1- Crumble
2- Dismay
3- Dolphin
4- Flaw
5- Mirage
6- Reality
7- Silver
8- Wreck This should be pretty interesting...[/i]
immaculate and bereft of flaw
You charmed many a man and lady
in your silver coat and your galore”
I decided to pursue this beauty,
so delicate and so powerful
Taking flight, i vow to follow closely
and yet admire her from afar like a fool
She too was drunk by her own beauty
and never noticed the fate that befall
I saw death approach her silently
and i cried, “flee lest you lose it all!”
An iceberg, our NatureÂ’s beauty
caused menÂ’s mirage to break and shimmer
She broke down unable to accept reality
sank into the depths without a whisper
“My precious, my wreck, my one true beauty
you crumble easily to my dismay
May you rest in peace and sleep deeply
on your bed where even dolphin cannot stay”
- a tribute by an albatross -
Next 8 words as requested by En En,
Misery
God
Sheep
newspaper
week
bread
permanent
time
frankly speaking, i dun noe how to. -
kaoz.. wat kind of words sia.. so hard to rhyme...Originally posted by gasband:Next 8 words as requested by En En,
Misery
God
Sheep
newspaper
week
bread
permanent
time
frankly speaking, i dun noe how to.
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haha
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you another one trying to kill me ar? *~*Originally posted by gasband:Next 8 words as requested by En En,
Misery
God
Sheep
newspaper
week
bread
permanent
time
frankly speaking, i dun noe how to.
nvm, I shall try... by tml night, shld give you one liao...
and remember hor gas ar, you also need to write ur own poem to ur words leh -
ok i am going for the "Most Dun Rhyme and Lame Poem" AwardOriginally posted by gasband:Next 8 words as requested by En En,
Misery
God
Sheep
newspaper
week
bread
permanent
time
frankly speaking, i dun noe how to.
God don't cause misery.
Newspapers, sheeps dont read.
I eat bread for almost a week.
Permanent time is but a dream.
haha. ok start throwing stones and your jeers. -
so fast... *~*Originally posted by gasband:ok i am going for the "Most Dun Rhyme and Lame Poem" Award
God don't cause misery.
Newspapers, sheeps dont read.
I eat bread for almost a week.
Permanent time is but a dream.
haha. ok start throwing stones and your jeers.
good try though
wonders wat anyone elso could come up with... -
urs is more like cloze passageOriginally posted by gasband:ok i am going for the "Most Dun Rhyme and Lame Poem" Award
God don't cause misery.
Newspapers, sheeps dont read.
I eat bread for almost a week.
Permanent time is but a dream.
haha. ok start throwing stones and your jeers.
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Originally posted by gasband:Misery
God
Sheep
newspaper
week
bread
permanent
time
Mine didn't rhyme, but at least... I tried...
Optimist and hard core poet, pls refrain from reading... [/quote]
Week after week
day after day
flightly and incessant movements,
like those of a flower fae...
Tragedies reported in newspapers,
pain engraved daily, in hearts of men...
darkness embraced those ready,
insanity guided their hands...
Predator over prey,
the weak shall not survive,
the quest and war for "Peace to all",
would never justify.
Time after time,
history repeats
Peace is never permanent,
and it never would be...
waiting for bloodshed- preparing for the worse...
scorning the useless sacrifices of the sheeps...
"Dear, tonight we'll be having bread for dinner,
to complete our five-course feast...
Oh God please, put this world out of your misery"
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I hope no one minded ^that...
well... still wondering wat others could come up with... -
Misery is the life we leadOriginally posted by gasband:Next 8 words as requested by En En,
Misery
God
Sheep
newspaper
week
bread
permanent
time
frankly speaking, i dun noe how to.
Senseless newspaper are wat we read
Eat and sleep, week by week
A permanent routine tat we all seek
Time goes by, in a blink
Oni the mouldy bread exist
Dead sheep creep the deadly dish
All are waiting for God to speak -
who push this topic to the top ah? seem like no one reallly like poems
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I have tried these 8 words *pant*....... here goes:Originally posted by gasband:Next 8 words as requested by En En,
Misery
God
Sheep
newspaper
week
bread
permanent
time
frankly speaking, i dun noe how to.
She knelt by her bed and clasp her small hands
“Dear God,” she prayed softly “Please make amends
Remove me from this misery and pain
my time here has passed too long for any gain
I read the newspaper and learnt of SamÂ’s death
my permanent void is now filled with regret
Like a lost sheep seeking her handsome ram
week after week I only long for Sam
I am tired of all these pining nites
please give up my bread and let us reunite."