8 words poetry
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cmon delusion give it a try~~
i'm sure neither of me or en would write a poem (a crap one in my case!!) and then extract words out. we've got nothing to gain that way anyway..
it's just fun and challenging that's why we do it.
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I beg to differ...Originally posted by jOhO:cmon delusion give it a try~~
i'm sure neither of me or en would write a poem (a crap one in my case!!) and then extract words out. we've got nothing to gain that way anyway..
it's just fun and challenging that's why we do it.
I'd describe it as insane and challenging...
goodness knows how tough a time I had trying to make sense out of the words... *~*
isn't my idea of fun... well, not exactly anyway~ -
hahhahaOriginally posted by En':I beg to differ...
I'd describe it as insane and challenging...
goodness knows how tough a time I had trying to make sense out of the words... *~*
isn't my idea of fun... well, not exactly anyway~
then why torture urself??
masochist!!
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hey! weren't u doing the same to yourself... *~*Originally posted by jOhO:hahhaha
then why torture urself??
masochist!!
sides, can exercise creativity mah...
why not...?
this isn't going to be as fun unless lotsa people play...
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no.. i still have my hair on my head and i didn't gasp for air whie i was composing that load of crap!!Originally posted by En':hey! weren't u doing the same to yourself... *~*
sides, can exercise creativity mah...
why not...?
this isn't going to be as fun unless lotsa people play...
well hope more pple join in. i guess it does take effort, and when pple come here they wanna "relax" and crap, or chill out, or else they have some heavy load in their heart to pour out to all the aunts and uncles agony here (er that didn't sound rite, linguistically speaking
).
anywayZZZZZZ.. i'm gonna zleep.. er i mean sleep! niteZZZ~~~!! -
face it, we just killed our brains, now still in malfunctioning mode (for mine at least...)Originally posted by jOhO:no.. i still have my hair on my head and i didn't gasp for air whie i was composing that load of crap!!
well hope more pple join in. i guess it does take effort, and when pple come here they wanna "relax" and crap, or chill out, or else they have some heavy load in their heart to pour out to all the aunts and uncles agony here (er that didn't sound rite, linguistically speaking ).
anywayZZZZZZ.. i'm gonna zleep.. er i mean sleep! niteZZZ~~~!!
hey~ you're supposed to be asleep ler... -
Silver moonlight clothed the naked beachOriginally posted by En':
,
This is a game where a user of this forum gives out 8 completely random words (or 10 for advanced) and the rest of the members try to compose a poem, (making sure the poem includes all 8 words), that actually makes sense... Anyone up for the challenge?
Okay, the first word list:
1- Crumble
2- Dismay
3- Dolphin
4- Flaw
5- Mirage
6- Reality
7- Silver
8- Wreck This should be pretty interesting...[/i]
A dolphin like creature roam the shiny sea
Full of dismay the creature seem
Flaw is the world it had lived in
Crumble to the test of the industries
Wreck is the word for this hated realm
Mirage of the moon could no longer be seen
Life is tough but its reality. -
/impressed...Originally posted by De|usi0n:Silver moonlight clothed the naked beach
A dolphin like creature roam the shiny sea
Full of dismay the creature seem
Flaw is the world it had lived in
Crumble to the test of the industries
Wreck is the word for this hated realm
Mirage of the moon could no longer be seen
Life is tough but its reality.
you are good...
care to try joho's list?
(this one I gotta see... coz it sure took me one morn to make it *~* ) -
wat's his listOriginally posted by En':/impressed...
you are good...
care to try joho's list?
(this one I gotta see... coz it sure took me one morn to make it *~* ) -
profoundOriginally posted by De|usi0n:wat's his list
spectrum
tangible
wise
elementary
swan
hide
shimmer
^ this one...
tsk tsk boy...
would have thought you read thru' his replies liao... -
hey not bad at all!!Originally posted by De|usi0n:Silver moonlight clothed the naked beach
A dolphin like creature roam the shiny sea
Full of dismay the creature seem
Flaw is the world it had lived in
Crumble to the test of the industries
Wreck is the word for this hated realm
Mirage of the moon could no longer be seen
Life is tough but its reality. i like the silver moonlight
check grammar tho. just a no-offence-intended comment -
The heat shimmer as the sun rosed highOriginally posted by jOhO:i suddenly remember this thread! no business here eh en?
i too, forgot to get 8 words for you.
ok let's see.. no need dictionary:
profound
spectrum
tangible
wise
elementary
swan
hide
shimmer
The crowd swan in as the fire burns bright
Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide
The fool looks on, the wise think twice
Profound is his thought evgraved in his mind
Flame and water, an elementary sight
The crowd dismissed as the spectrum subsides
In case u donno wat i toking..its a fire at a building in the day. Until the fireman comes to put out the fire -
that's a fast oneOriginally posted by De|usi0n:The heat shimmer as the sun rosed high
The crowd swan in as the fire burns bright
Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide
The fool looks on, the wise think twice
Profound is his thought evgraved in his mind
Flame and water, an elementary sight
The crowd dismissed as the spectrum subsides
In case u donno wat i toking..its a fire at a building in the day. Until the fireman comes to put out the fire and I never thought of those words in such a context... hmmm...
you wanna try coming up with a word list?
tonight? (after I get my zzz ) -
missed out "tangible"Originally posted by De|usi0n:The heat shimmer as the sun rosed high
The crowd swan in as the fire burns bright
Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide
The fool looks on, the wise think twice
Profound is his thought evgraved in his mind
Flame and water, an elementary sight
The crowd dismissed as the spectrum subsides
In case u donno wat i toking..its a fire at a building in the day. Until the fireman comes to put out the fire
perhaps where u used the word "swan" u meant "swarm"? and should be in the past tense..
okok i have to stop this! too damn critical.. hey good try, and as en said, it's to promote creativity and it has been achieved! -
you know wat... I think you must be the procrastination type...Originally posted by jOhO:missed out "tangible"
perhaps where u used the word "swan" u meant "swarm"? and should be in the past tense..
okok i have to stop this! too damn critical.. hey good try, and as en said, it's to promote creativity and it has been achieved!
coz u seem to function better under tireness... can catch the small detail... (me in desperate need of zzz... *~* ) -
care to haf a go at my list?
1. illusion
2. devastation
3. solution
4. rampage
5. promise
6. unknown
7. survival
8. indulge
gd luck...i thnk 1st than i post my poem also.
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tonight, after I get my zzz...Originally posted by De|usi0n:care to haf a go at my list?
1. illusion
2. devastation
3. solution
4. rampage
5. promise
6. unknown
7. survival
8. indulge
gd luck...i thnk 1st than i post my poem also.
thx del... -
hmmmmmmm~~Originally posted by De|usi0n:care to haf a go at my list?
1. illusion
2. devastation
3. solution
4. rampage
5. promise
6. unknown
7. survival
8. indulge
gd luck...i thnk 1st than i post my poem also.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i need to rest first... dying. -
oh yes.. i work well tired. but the slightest thing that turns me off, i'm gone!Originally posted by En':you know wat... I think you must be the procrastination type...
coz u seem to function better under tireness... can catch the small detail... (me in desperate need of zzz... *~* )
seriously it's nothing i'm proud off. very weak-willed. very lazy.
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updated one.
The heat shimmer as the sun rises high
The crowd swan in as the fire burns bright
Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide
The fool looks on, the wise think twice
Profound is his thought evgraves in his mind
Flame and water, an elementary sight
Tangible, a display of eachs own might
The crowd dismiss as the spectrum subsides
In case u donno wat i toking..its a fire at a building in the day. Until the fireman comes to put out the fire -
I tot I told u to post the list tonight...?Originally posted by De|usi0n:care to haf a go at my list?
1. illusion
2. devastation
3. solution
4. rampage
5. promise
6. unknown
7. survival
8. indulge
gd luck...i thnk 1st than i post my poem also.
you gotta suffer thru this bad poetry liao, no laughing hor...
no more lists till I get my rest can...?
pai seh, pai seh...
but after I read thru the words, I just had to give it a go... *~*
(bad habit, I know...)[/quote]
Indulge in your imagination
yet hold it tight, control it well,
for it's rampage causes devastation,
and that was how many a wise men fell...
Imagination is needed for the survival through unusual situations
it's dangers unknown to all throughout the eons
it promises to provide a solution,
yet, wat if the solution is but an illusion?
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brain-dead... -
ok here we go.. something a little more devilish!!Originally posted by De|usi0n:care to haf a go at my list?
1. illusion
2. devastation
3. solution
4. rampage
5. promise
6. unknown
7. survival
8. indulge
gd luck...i thnk 1st than i post my poem also.
Coitus
Life isn't just about survival,
it's about indulging ourselves,
to go out on a rampage seeking
carnal, secular pleasure.
To seek the unknown,
that elusive illusion called love,
is to ensure devastation,
pain and anguish eternally.
Survival depends on never breaking
the promise to one's body.
Illusions do not feed this desire,
and the only solution, coitus. -
muahahahahahhaha i can tell.. u're really forcing it aren't u?Originally posted by En':Indulge in your imagination
yet hold it tight, control it well,
for it's rampage causes devastation,
and that was how many a wise men fell...
Imagination is needed for the survival through unusual situations
it's dangers unknown to all throughout the eons
it promises to provide a solution,
yet, wat if the solution is but an illusion?
brain-dead...
aiyoh poor thing... u know if u're so tired u're not gonna enjoy ur day at all.. -
Originally posted by jOhO:
you too huh?
ok here we go.. something a little more devilish!!
[b]Coitus
Life isn't just about survival,
it's about indulging ourselves,
to go out on a rampage seeking
carnal, secular pleasure.
To seek the unknown,
that elusive illusion called love,
is to ensure devastation,
pain and anguish eternally.
Survival depends on never breaking
the promise to one's body.
Illusions do not feed this desire,
and the only solution, coitus.[/b]
*~* erm... wahahahaha
over-indulgence in *ahem...*
/still prefers to indulge in illusion rather than the *ahem* coitus
that's it, I really gotta go, enjoy urselves people, bye bye... -
ahahhaha.. wat do u mean me too? i was VERY sober and sane and awake writing this!Originally posted by En':you too huh?
*~* erm... wahahahaha
over-indulgence in *ahem...*
/still prefers to indulge in illusion rather than the *ahem* coitus
that's it, I really gotta go, enjoy urselves people, bye bye...
most of the poetry is about sadness, bleakness, life, love, emotions. SEX is a very big part of many pple's lives too!
of course this isn't the way to look at sex, altho some do! and with those words i somehow saw an opportunity to write about how those pple could view sex.
hope u can enjoy urself today.. altho i dun see how..